Suffered from a weird fit of option paralysis when I was trying to figure out what, specifically, this part should be about.  So I figured, whatever, smash all the ideas together and cut out what doesn't work.  Then wonder why nobody was interested completely ignoring that it's way the fuck in left field compared to everything else thus far.

EDIT: Toned it down.  It wasn't bad before, just a little dubious.  Although I could tell you stories about folks who wrote yaoi and were confused when they were told that they just wrote non-con.  Happens way more often than you'd think.